Texts, Emails and Voice Notes in a Novel: Formatting and Rhythm
There are three ways to format text messages in a novel that publishers accept: in italics, one message per line, with the sender's name; as a set-off block, like a document dropped into the narrative; or folded into the narration and reported indirectly. None of the three uses the quotation marks of spoken dialogue, because a written message is not speech. Which one you pick depends on how often messages appear in your novel; the hard part is not typographic, it is rhythm and voice.
The three layouts
The examples come from an invented novel, "No Signal": Lila, seventeen, and her brother Youssef, who has left to work in Lyon.
1. Italics, one message per line. The most readable option when exchanges are short and frequent. The name works as a tag and disappears as soon as the alternation is clear.
Youssef: you home? Lila: yes Youssef: and? Lila: and nothing
2. The set-off block. For a long message, an email, or an exchange the character rereads afterwards. The block is indented, sometimes set in a different typeface in print, and introduced by the narration.
She opened the email she had never sent.
Subject: (none) You told me to call if things weren't okay. Things aren't okay. I don't know what that means, calling. I'm not calling you.
The block treats the message as an object the reader looks at over the character's shoulder; it slows the scene down, which is sometimes exactly what you want.
3. The message folded into narration. For messages that do not deserve to be read. Youssef texted that he would be back on Friday. She did not reply. Two sentences, and the reader knows everything.
The only rule that matters is consistency: one layout per novel for short messages, one for long ones, and no switching. For spoken lines, quotation marks and tags, the full rule is in how to punctuate dialogue.
The rhythm mistakes
The four-line text. Nobody writes a paragraph in a text message, except to break up. A four-line text in a novel is stage dialogue in disguise. If your character has that much to say, have her call, or split the message into three sends: the reader watches the three bubbles arrive, and it is tenser.
The exchange that informs. As in spoken dialogue, two characters reminding each other by text of what they both know are writing for the reader. The trap is described in how to write realistic dialogue, and it is even more visible in twelve words.
No delay. A text has a response time, and that time is story. "He saw she had read it. Nothing. He put the phone face down on the table" says more than any reply. The message read and not answered, the message deleted before sending: these are the gestures that belong to this kind of dialogue.
Fake spelling. Phonetic text speak ("wot", "c u") dates a book within ten years. Mark fast writing with dropped capitals and missing full stops, not with spelling mistakes.
Keeping the voice in twelve characters
A short message forces you to concentrate the voice. What separates Lila from Youssef in three words: she never uses a full stop, he always does; she answers "ok" when things are fine and "alright" when they are not; he asks questions, she states. These markers go into the character profile, alongside speech habits, and they make the sender's name unnecessary after two exchanges. The method for building them is in how to write a distinct character voice; in Sagoræ, the Archivist keeps the profile open beside the chapter so that Lila's "ok" stays hers to the last page.
Voice notes are a case of their own: they are transcribed like speech, in italics or as a block, with the hesitations of talk ("um, no, wait") and without dialogue punctuation. They are often the liveliest passages in a contemporary novel, and the format favoured by young writers working on a novel as a teenager, about lives lived largely through screens.
Frequently asked questions
How do you format a text message in a novel? In italics, one message per line, with the sender's name first; or as a set-off block for long messages; or reported inside the narration. Never with the quotation marks of spoken dialogue.
Do text messages need quotation marks? No. Quotation marks signal spoken words. A written message is set apart by italics or indentation.
How do you write an email in a novel? As a set-off block, with the subject line first if you want the document effect, introduced by a sentence of narration. Cut the greetings and sign-offs unless they say something about the character.
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